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In the distance I see you plucking in the vast meadow of flowers. You choose many flowers; the vibrant poppies, the cheerful daisies, the elegant violets, even the passionate roses. Looking over the field I realize that I'm the only lily, and I know that you favor lilies. My heart pounds. I anxiously await your touch. Your hair is the color of the night sky. Your eyes twinkle like the stars - such a beautiful night! Then I look into your heart. There are some rough edges, but I look even deeper and see understanding and kindness - a good heart. My heart beats ever fonder. Your kiss would be pure bliss. Your embrace would be a haven, sheltering me from the world. Your caress would soothe me to sleep in your arms. And so I wait for you, hopeful that you will find me.
©2009-2010 ~FullofPersonality
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This is a poem I wrote a while ago about a guy I like. I'm such a hopeless romantic. :P
Also, constructive criticism would be nice. :D

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Wow, that's gorgeous! Critique isn't my strong point I'm afraid, especially with poetry. ^^; You have a real talent though; do you write poetry often?

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Not to mention the pincers. *clickclick*
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Actually, I don't. The last poem I wrote before this one was in 3rd grade (I'm pretty sure it's still stashed somewhere, maybe I'll upload it just because). I have to be really inspired to write a poem. I find that it's fun to write them, though. :)
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Absolutely beautiful!

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That's a really cute poem. That reminds me--I myself should go back to writing poetry sometime.
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Very cute. :) I really like it.

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I:heart:zeek :) teehee
I Believe in Jesus Christ.
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:) You're welcome!

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:heart: GaruxPucca :smooch:
I:heart:zeek :) teehee
I Believe in Jesus Christ.

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